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--- For Saturday morning
,
Mia got up a little late because she had stayed up reading
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She felt encouraged and excited to return
.,
Maybe
,
Walking with Dylan
.
Just thinking about it
,
his heart was glad
,
But at the same time he felt like he was stepping into the lion'
;
s den
.,
And she didn'
;
t want to be consumed by more pain than she already felt
..
The mere memory of her parents tormented and consoled her
.,
but it was a pain that would never go away
.
also
,
The times he had fallen in love had not gone well for him
;
However
,
I had a hope
,
But I wouldn'
;
t put my hopes on something that might end badly
..
He went down to the kitchen and saw two breakfasts served and a note that said: *My children
,
I will go to the town for things
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Have breakfast and be ready for us to go out to the puddles
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It won'
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t take long
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* Mia had scrambled eggs and a quick sandwich for breakfast
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and when it was over
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He stood up quickly
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He washed the dishes and went out to change
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When he was heading to his room
,
collided with Dylan'
;
s bare chest and quickly moved away
,
to the point that Dylan took her by the waist
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because he was about to fall
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—In such a hurry
,
eh
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Or are you eager to go to the puddles and see my statuesque figure
??
—he said smiling
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—Don'
;
t be deluded
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I'
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m not worried about that
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I just want to be quick when your grandmother arrives
..
Dylan moved a little closer
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which made her blush
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She looked at his bare chest and quickly looked away
.,
meeting intense brown eyes that were looking at her lips
.
But they heard the grandmother'
;
s voice and Mia moved away
.,
heading to his room
.
When he was there
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could hear the grandmother'
;
s voice and what she was saying
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—I hope you are ready now
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Because I already have everything ready —the grandmother shouted from the kitchen
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-Grandmother
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I haven'
;
t had breakfast
!
—he heard Dylan shout
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who was entering into a loving discussion
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Mia was too nervous
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Well
,
it is known
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