Certainly! Here’s the revised version with a more integrated description of her

Certainly! Here’s the revised version with a more integrated description of her mother’s death: --- In the dim, oppressive light of the abandoned attic, Adora huddled in despair, surrounded by the heavy stench of decay and neglect. Her stepmother had imprisoned her here as punishment for wearing the exquisite dress her grandfather had gifted her—a dress that underscored the favoritism he had shown her over her stepsister. The stepsister, clad in a far cheaper gown, was a constant reminder of Adora’s perceived privilege. This cruelty was further compounded by the shadowy mystery of her mother’s death, which was whispered to have been either murder or suicide, fueled by her husband’s infidelity. Driven by envy and malice, the stepmother and stepsister had torn the cherished dress to tatters and cut off Adora’s long, lustrous hair. They then drenched her in kitchen refuse, leaving her filthy and degraded. The attic, once a refuge, now echoed with her silent sobs and the weight of her sorrow. The final blow came when they revealed that her beloved grandfather, who had died under mysterious and suspicious circumstances, had been poisoned—a dark secret they had kept from her to deepen her torment. Adding to her agony was the haunting reality of her mother’s death, a tragedy enveloped in suspicion and scandal, casting a long shadow over Adora’s shattered world.